Fiction

The Bronze Token

Author: Lucy Hymas (University of Salford)

  • The Bronze Token

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    The Bronze Token

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Abstract

Extract from a novel in progress by Lucy Hymas. 


Novel Synopsis:

In Cymru, 126 BC, Ris betrays his tribe, leading to a deadly ambush and his own demise. Alys is taken in for questioning about her potential involvement in her brother's crimes. She can’t bring herself to believe that he is guilty and denies all knowledge of his actions. She is brought before King Aldith so that her fate can be decided. Llyr, the king’s son, steps in and takes charge of her; he sees potential in Alys and is determined to make her into his loyal follower. Both Llyr and Alys hold a deep hatred for King Aldith: Alys views him as a hypocrite and blames him for her brother's death, while Llyr despises the way he runs the tribe and his poor management in the war against their enemy tribe, The Children of Don. Llyr conspires to murder his father and take over the tribe himself. He enlists Alys as his deputy, and they successfully carry out the plan to overthrow King Aldith. 

Together, Llyr and Alys completely overhaul the tribe, now named The Children of Llyr, and throw themselves into the war against The Children of Don. Alys has grown to accept that her brother did betray the tribe all those years ago, but she can’t stop wondering about his reasons. Eventually, she discovers that The Children of Don promised him a large amount of much needed gold in return for information, before naming him as their informant in order to get out of paying. Llyr, once a charismatic and fair ruler, is slowly becoming more brutal and vicious, losing himself to an obsession with becoming better than his father. He is determined to win this war and become a legendary king, at any cost. Alys, her hatred against The Children of Don ignited by her new discovery, encourages this change in him. Due to this, The Children of Llyr start to gain a reputation as being ‘the powers of dark’. 

In Rheged, 552 AD, after Eithne’s village is massacred by the Picts, she is found in the woods by Llyr, who offers her shelter. Eithne views him as a saviour and accepts, following him to a decrepit Roman villa where he and Alys live. As she settles into her new home, Eithne begins to notice strange things about the two. Both have a peculiar brand on their skin and often mysteriously disappear. After a month, Llyr brings home Dago. Although Eithne trusts Llyr and Alys, Llyr begins to display a sinister side, leading Eithne to become suspicious of his true motives and by association, Alys’s. Eithne starts to develop a close relationship with Dago, viewing him as a younger brother, and begins a tentative romance with Alys - despite her suspicions. 

One night, she walks in on Alys bathing and notices that parts of her skin have begun to decompose. After confronting her Alys reveals the truth: she tells Eithne about her past and the eternal war between The Children of Don and The Children of Llyr. Eventually, both families fought each other to near extinction, so Llyr engineered a bronze token that would give him the power of immortality. He and Alys fled from Cymru, vowing to one day return and reign destruction upon the descendants of Don. The bronze token, when branded onto a body, removes the soul and creates an indestructible physique that will last for seven years before rotting. Llyr and Alys can then place their own souls into these undying bodies for seven years. Their current time is nearly up, so they are planning on using Eithne and Dago as their next vessels.

Alys has become tired of Llyr, he lives in the past and his obsession has warped his mind. All he wants to do is return to their lands and slaughter his way back into power. Alys has moved on and wishes to stay in this new world. Additionally, she has grown to love Eithne and doesn’t wish to see her die. She knows they can’t run, as Llyr will stop at nothing to find them. The only way is to destroy his immortal soul in the exact moment it transitions into Dago’s empty body. Eithne initially rejects this idea, but eventually comes to accept that she must betray Dago, so the two execute the plan. In the aftermath, Eithne realises that her decision means that she will have to sacrifice countless more innocents so that Alys can live on.


Keywords: Novel, Historical Novel

How to Cite:

Hymas, L., (2024) “The Bronze Token”, Grit: The Northern School of Writing Journal 1(3). doi: https://doi.org/10.57898/salwriters.209

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30 Apr 2024
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The Bronze Token

“‘O ye immortal powers,’ cried he, ‘who preside over the destiny of us frail mortals! Ye have restored me my Astarte; but alas! At what a conjuncture, in what a place, and in what a state and condition do I view her?’”

– Voltaire

Cymru, 126 BC – Chapter One

In her blurred line of vision, Alys could see a masked man leaning over her. He hit her jaw and she let out a muffled cry before weakly spitting small flecks of blood from her mouth.

“Ris, your own brother, colluded with the enemy. He spilled the secrets of our tribe to them, and you expect us to believe you had no knowledge of this? Everyone knows how close you were. Either you were involved with his traitorous designs, or you knew about them and did nothing to prevent him. Do you deny it?”

Alys pulled against the restraints, her body trembling, before it gave and collapsed against the table. They had been interrogating her for days now and had gotten nowhere, yet still asked the same questions over and over again, waiting for her to break, to admit everything they wanted to hear. Her lips felt chapped as she licked them; when was it that she had last drank water? She thought back to the moment when they had come for her brother. She remembered screaming as he clung to her, whispering in her ear asking for her forgiveness. He didn’t say a word as they took him. He kept his chin high, even as they lifted the executioner's blade. After the burial, once they had all gone, she stayed curled beside his rocky tomb. She cried until her cries turned into choking gasps. Eventually, her gasps turned into rattling wheezes, and the wheezes into silence.

“I knew nothing.”

“I should just kill you.” The man took a small knife from a leather pouch and trailed the sharp edge around her chest, nicking the skin and producing small pearls of blood that mixed with the sweat gathered there. “Do you know how many people died in the ambush? The ambush that only succeeded due to information slipped to Don’s lackeys by Ris? Three hundred: men, women and children – my own child among them. He was a strong lad you know, barely had a beard on him, but a prodigy with the spear. Of course he never stood a chance against a seasoned warrior, they cut him down in an instant, I imagine. So, forgive me if I don’t believe this bullshit that you’re currently spewing you traitorous bitch.”

He was so close that Alys could feel his spittle landing on her cheek and against the corners of her mouth. She stared at his exposed chin and resisted the urge to lean up and rip into it with her teeth. If this man would treat her like an animal then she would act like one, she would be a vengeful wolf sent by the gods to tear these lies from his mouth. No matter what they said, she knew that her Ris could never do such a thing. The man began to beat her with the hilt of his knife, and she felt as if she was falling out of her body. It was as though her consciousness was connected only by a thin, woven thread that had been pulled so taunt that it was beginning to fray and split. She licked her lips once more, chasing the illusion of moisture, and tried to focus on remaining awake.

Her dazed mind wandered back to the week before the ambush, when she and Ris had been sparring. She’d just succeeded in a particularly complicated feint, but before she could strike the winning blow Ris had pulled a short dagger from his sleeve and held it to her side.

“You favour your left side still, guard your right more. Again.” His words were short and clipped, devoid of their usual praises. They both jumped back and began to circle one another, occasionally darting forwards in a clashing of swords. “You’re only an average fighter,” he told her. Alys knew this, of course, but it still hurt to hear her brother say it. “You can hold your own, which is good, but it won’t be enough. Your strength lies in your cunning and your strategy, do you understand? You must always think of the bigger picture, Alys.”

She grinned at him. “I always do.”

When she came to, the masked man had gone. A couple of slaves stood in the doorway muttering to each other with strange expressions, a mixture of pity and disgust.

“You’re to come before King Aldith.”

They untied her binds and pulled her outside, her legs, too weak to support her weight, dragged behind her, leaving a trail in the loose earth. Once outside, the bright sun burnt her eyes, and she took great, shuddering gasps of fresh air.

Eventually, they came to a large roundhouse. Two guards dressed for battle were standing at the entrance, their hair spiked and faces painted with great swirling patterns. Alys gathered herself, preparing for what lay ahead. It was likely that she was brought here so that the king could interrogate her himself, or simply order her execution. If she kept denying everything, he would grow annoyed and have her killed. She could denounce Ris, fall at the king's feet and beg to be made into a slave as penance for her brother's supposed crimes, but how long would she be able to live as a slave? She was hated by too many people. She’d be murdered before the week was up.

The slaves threw her to her knees in the centre of the wide room. Everything around her screamed of a savage opulence. Richly woven tapestries depicting vicious battles of the gods and legendary kings adorned the walls. Mounted above the entrance was the head of a large brown bear, its mouth twisted open to reveal its bloody and broken teeth. Ahead of her, seated on oaken chairs, were the king and queen, surrounding them stood a small number of nobles and other members of the ruling family. They cut an intimidating picture as they stared down at her, swathed in beautiful, bright fabrics and golden ornaments, a world away from the filthy and unkempt woman kneeling before them.

“Alys, Daughter of Coel.” King Aldith stood and spoke, his wavering voice at odds with his impressive appearance. “You stand before me today so we can decide your fate. Your brother, Ris, Son of Coel, betrayed us. He conspired with our enemies, the Children of Don, allowing them to attack our people. You say you were unaware of his plans, yet something must still be done. Too much blood has been spilled.”

It was at this moment that Alys felt her own heart, that had previously been beating against her chest like a frantic bird, grow still and fill with hate. She looked up at Aldith and saw him as he was: a weak man, a charlatan king parading around a fraudulent hall filled with glories that were not his own. He dares talk of ‘betrayal’, condemning her brother to death, when the tribe had lost thousands to a war which he had started and had been consistently losing since the very beginning.

She gently smiled and looked up. “Kill me then.” When she spoke, it was not with the subservience expected of a tortured prisoner, but as if she looked down on everyone in that room, like they were nothing more than ants running around her feet. The man standing behind the queen glanced at her. Alys had never seen him before. He was tall and lithe, with a straight, proud nose leading down to thin lips. Overall, his appearance was plain, but his eyes betrayed intelligence. It was with these eyes that he regarded her now, not with hatred, but with an amused curiosity.

“You see. She says so herself!” Cadoc, one of the noblemen in attendance, called out. “Let's all go to the executioner's block for a show!”

Efa, standing beside him, shot out a hand, stopping his movements with her vice-like grip. “Don’t be hasty, dear husband. Let’s not waste life.” She turned and addressed King Aldith, “My king. She’s the last remnant of the Coel clan. Killing her may anger the gods, give her to us instead.”

Alys could see that Efa’s comment had shaken the king. There was a light sheen of sweat on his face. He turned to the man she had noticed earlier and asked, “Llyr, where is the soothsayer?”

“He has gone into the forest to commune with nature, father. He will return in a month.”

“A month?” King Aldith was trembling now. He reached down and grabbed the pretty clay vase next to his feet before throwing it against the wall. The resulting crash made the nobles jump in fright, Alys continued to smile calmly, never once taking her eyes off the king. “You!” King Aldith turned to Alys, incensed by her expression. He jabbed his finger towards her in a fit of rage, “One month. One month and we shall see if your head rolls.”

“Father, if I may.” Llyr stepped forward towards Alys. “You don’t look like someone who wishes to die.”

“I’m not.”

He scrutinised her for a second, before turning and addressing the room. “I shall take her for this month.”

The king nodded. “As you will, Llyr.”